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10 Glaring Mistakes Amateur Writers Make and How to Avoid Them
By Nora Profit
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This book is for people who want to take the first steps to writing well. While there are no rules to assure great writing, there are ways to avoid bad writing.
This book shows readers quickly and succinctly how to avoid those top ten writing mistakes that tell agents and publishers their writing is not what it should be.
Agents and editors do not read manuscripts to enjoy them; their goal is to get through the pile and find good writers.
Learn which mistakes a writer should never make.